Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, teacher.
Our progress in today's class was faster than I expected. ^^
I'm so sorry that I hesitated in speaking.
It's because I feel difficulty in learning past perfect.
I'm able to understand it when I read it, but it's not easy to speak immediately.
Of course, I will try to overcome this problem.
In hindsight, what was a bad financial decision you made? Why?
Early in 2000, stock fund was really popular here in Korea.
Stock fund is one of the financial instruments that don't guarantee their interest and principal.
In those days, we couldn't recognize their riskiness because the stock market was in good shape.
Then, I had several stock funds that invested in foreign countries such as USA, and China.
However, my assets decreased by about half after Lehman Brothers collapse.
I should have been more considerate to invest in non-guaranteed principal funds.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! That\'s the spirit! I don\'t want you to rely too much on your well-prepared sentences. You need to be more spontaneous and eloquent. I believe you can do it.
Thanks for doing your homework.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Good morning, teacher.
>> CORRECT! Our progress in today\'s class was faster than I expected. ^^
>> CORRECT! I\'m so sorry that I hesitated in speaking.
>> CORRECT! It\'s because I feel difficulty in learning past perfect.
>> It\'s because learning about the past perfect is difficult for me.I\'m able to understand it when I read it, but it\'s not easy to speak immediately.
>> CORRECT! Of course, I will try to overcome this problem.
>> CORRECT! Early in 2000, stock fund was really popular here in Korea.
>> CORRECT! Stock fund is one of the financial instruments that don\'t guarantee their interest and principal.
>> CORRECT!
>> doesn\'tIn those days, we couldn\'t recognize their riskiness because the stock market was in good shape.
>> Back in those days, we didn\'t realize the risk because the stock market was in good shape.
Then, I had several stock funds that invested in foreign countries such as USA, and China.
>> Back then, I had several stock funds that invested in foreign countries such as the U.S.A. and China.However, my assets decreased by about half after the Lehman Brothers\' collapse.
>> CORRECT! I should have been more considerate to invest in non-guaranteed principal funds.
>> I should have considered investing in non-guaranteed principal funds more.
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