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2016-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Wow!! Thanks so much!!^^ I didn't shout in class today..hehe My voice is better. *^^* Thanks for encouraging me everyday..^^ It is a good idea to take a nap for a while at work.. That will make wprkers feel energetic.. Companies should give wellfare to workers..right? I will make that kind of wellfare when I get my own academy..hehe 1. It's the big blue building across from ( = in front of) the bank. 2. Just keep walking toward ( = in the direction of) that skyscraper. 3. There's no animosity with us. 4. Throughout history, we humans have treated animals badly. 5. Throughout all of his faults, she still found him very attractive.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

I also love the idea of being able to take a nap at work.

I think Google takes care of its employees well.

I also read that Google allows their employees to decorate their office space any way they want.

They also have a spa inside the office.

I think if I work in an office like that, I wouldn\'t go home. ^^\\

You\'ll make a good employer, I\'m sure.

Because you think of your employees\' well-being. ^^;

See you later, Miss [이름]!

Teacher Anne

 

Wow!! Thanks so much!!^^

>> Correct!
I didn\'t shout in class today..hehe My voice is better. *^^*

>> Correct! [my]
Thanks for encouraging me everyday..^^

>> Correct!
It is a good idea to take a nap for a while at work..

>> Correct!
That will make wprkers feel energetic..

>> Correct! [workers]
Companies should give wellfare to workers..right?

>> Companies should think about the welfare of their workers, right?
I will make that kind of wellfare when I get my own academy..hehe

>> I will look after my workers\' welfare when I get my own academy..hehe
1. It\'s the big blue building across from ( = in front of) the bank.

>> Correct!
2. Just keep walking toward ( = in the direction of) that skyscraper.

>> Correct!
3. There\'s no animosity with us.

>> between
4. Throughout history, we humans have treated animals badly.

>> Correct!
5. Throughout all of his faults, she still found him very attractive.

>> With

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