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Hi Miss [이름]!
I also love the idea of being able to take a nap at work.
I think Google takes care of its employees well.
I also read that Google allows their employees to decorate their office space any way they want.
They also have a spa inside the office.
I think if I work in an office like that, I wouldn\'t go home. ^^\\
You\'ll make a good employer, I\'m sure.
Because you think of your employees\' well-being. ^^;
See you later, Miss [이름]!
Teacher Anne
Wow!! Thanks so much!!^^
>> Correct!
I didn\'t shout in class today..hehe My voice is better. *^^*
>> Correct! [my]
Thanks for encouraging me everyday..^^
>> Correct!
It is a good idea to take a nap for a while at work..
>> Correct!
That will make wprkers feel energetic..
>> Correct! [workers]
Companies should give wellfare to workers..right?
>> Companies should think about the welfare of their workers, right?
I will make that kind of wellfare when I get my own academy..hehe
>> I will look after my workers\' welfare when I get my own academy..hehe
1. It\'s the big blue building across from ( = in front of) the bank.
>> Correct!
2. Just keep walking toward ( = in the direction of) that skyscraper.
>> Correct!
3. There\'s no animosity with us.
>> between
4. Throughout history, we humans have treated animals badly.
>> Correct!
5. Throughout all of his faults, she still found him very attractive.
>> With
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