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I disagree that reading fiction is more enjoyable than watching movies. I think watching movies has many attracting factors like visual material and audio element. The biggest example would be what audiences see through the screen. That is characters in the movie. Their powerful acting always makes people focus on story while they are in the theater. And additionally directing and sound system will effect to them. Personally I prefer watching movies to reading fiction because of taste. On the other hand in reading fiction case, I should guess every unspecific scenes and characters while I read. Of course it can be fun, but watching movies is much easier and more attractive to figure out story to me. if I have a chance to know a story with both ways I will just watch the movie.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! ^^
Good job! As for myself, I prefer doing both; reading the books and watching the movies just to compare between the book and the movie. That is of course is the movie is based on a book. Other than that, I prefer reading since sometimes movies could be so slow about the main plot. ^^
Anyway, good job in writing the composition. ^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I disagree that reading fiction is more enjoyable than watching movies. I think watching movies has many attracting factors like visual material and audio element. The biggest example would be what audiences see through the screen.
>> I disagree that reading fiction would be more enjoyable than watching movies since I think that movies have many attractive audio-visual elements that the audience can experience.
That is characters in the movie. Their powerful acting always makes people focus on story while they are in the theater. And additionally directing and sound system will effect to them.
>> An example of this audio-visual material is the actors themselves in the movie. The quality of their acting that people see enhances their focus on what the movie story is about and in addition, the soundtrack of the movie has it\'s respective effect on the audience.
Personally I prefer watching movies to reading fiction because of taste.
>> I personally prefer watching movies rather than reading fiction.
On the other hand in reading fiction case, I should guess every unspecific scenes and characters while I read. Of course it can be fun, but watching movies is much easier and more attractive to figure out story to me. if I have a chance to know a story with both ways I will just watch the movie.
>> On the other hand, I could guess non-specific scenes and characters while I read fiction. This could be fun of course but watching movies is makes the story much easier to figure out for me as wells as more attractive. If I were to choose between reading fiction and watching a movie, I\'d rather choose the latter.
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