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Have an amazing day ahead!
T. Lynn
In my opinion, another language can change language as the international language in the future like Chinese.
>>In my opinion, another language can change English as an international language in the future like Chinese.
China has a land mass and many population.
>>China has a huge land mass and it has a big population.
China also attend a lot of international meeting and it is developing in the world.
>>China is also attending a lot of international meetings and it is developing worldwide.
However, I want to be Hangul, Korean alphabet intermational language in the future.
>>However, I want Hangul or Korean to be the international language in the future.
Hangeul is very becautiful and it was created by my country\'s forefather.
>>Hangul is very beautiful and it was created by our forefather.
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