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2016-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. Are you having a nice weekend? It's already Sunday night. See you on Monday. Do you prefer sunrises or sunsets? Why? In Korea, many people love to watch the sunrise on New Year's Day. It is really nice to watch the sunrise with the people I love. I have gone to the East Sea to enjoy the sunrise when I was younger. It was really cold and I was tired to get up early. However, fantastic sunrise is worth trying. Someday, I'd like to show the nice sunrise to my son.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! I\'m more of a sunset person.   It signifies the sweetest \"hello and goodbye\" for me. Thanks for doing your homework. Keep up the good work! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Are you having a nice weekend? >> CORRECT!It\'s already Sunday night. >> CORRECT!See you on Monday. >> CORRECT!In Korea, many people love to watch the sunrise on New Year\'s Day. >> CORRECT!It is really nice to watch the sunrise with the people I love. >> CORRECT!I have gone to the East Sea to enjoy the sunrise when I was younger. >> I went to the East Sea to enjoy the sunrise when I was younger. It was really cold and I was tired to get up early. >> It was really cold and it was hard to get up early.However, fantastic sunrise is worth trying. >> However, seeing the fantastic sunrise was worth it.Someday, I\'d like to show the nice sunrise to my son. >> Someday, I\'d like to show the wonderful sunrise to my son.

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