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2016-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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It's Monday Charlie by the way I have a question about last composition The quality of their acting that people see enhances their focus on what the movie story is about There are see and enhances. I think both are verb so I wonder this structure. I would like to recommend having agriculture research center in Korea. Over the past few decades, I think South Korea have been developed business part and achieved good results as there are many varied companies including foreign companies. However, although Korea’s economy is growing, farming industry hasn’t been developed as much as business industry yet. And I sometimes could find farmers appealing their situations on news. Their harvest was cheaper than they put effort in. So I roughly know the present of farming. Definitely, the imbalance between both might bring bad effect to country and people for the future. That’s because I think the government have to make specific policy and invest money much more in agriculture.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   When you find two verbs in a sentences, these are called \"conjugated verbs\". It\'s not uncommon, it\'s actually used in a lot of sentences because conjugated verbs are verbs which have been changed to communicate one or more of the following: person, number, gender, tense, aspect, mood, or voice. Our sentence is focused more on changing the conditional mood.  The mood is like the purpose of the sentence in which a verb is used. The stative mood, for example, is used to make a statement. The interrogative mood is for questions. And the conditional mood is for sentences that pose hypothetical scenarios and the outcomes that depend on them. I hope that helps. ^^   P.S. Good job in writing about your opinion on agricultural research. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   by the way I have a question about last compositionThe quality of their acting that people see enhances their focus on what the movie story is about>> Before I start, I have a question about this sentence included in the last composition; \"The quality of their acting that people see enhances their focus on what the movie story is about and ... etc\"   There are see and enhances. I think both are verb so I wonder this structure.>> I\'m wondering why there are two verbs (i.e. \"see\" and \"enhance\") used in this sentence.I would like to recommend having agriculture research center in Korea. >> I would like to recommend having an agricultural research center in Korea.   Over the past few decades, I think South Korea have been developed business part and achieved good results as there are many varied companies including foreign companies.>> Over the past few decades, South Korea has successfully developed its commerce and business section shown through various companies including foreign ones.    However, although Korea’s economy is growing, farming industry hasn’t been developed as much as business industry yet. >> However, although Korea\'s commerce economy has been growing, the agricultural industry has yet to catch up.   And I sometimes could find farmers appealing their situations on news. Their harvest was cheaper than they put effort in. So I roughly know the present of farming. >> I have a rough understanding of the present state of farming since I sometimes see farmers making appeals about their situation on the news where they do not make much profit since there is no agricultural price support.   Definitely, the imbalance between both might bring bad effect to country and people for the future. That’s because I think the government have to make specific policy and invest money much more in agriculture. >> Forward-thinking, there is a definite inequality between the effects to the country and to the people and that is why, in my opinion, the goverment should implement specific policies and invest more money into agriculture.    

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