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2016-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Q. How do you deal with co-workers that you do not get along with? A. In this case, I become a nice woman to them because I want to have a good first impression to them. Let me tell you about my team leader. I had a bad first impression on him. He always played games on the internet during working hours. However, when I had some problems with my co-workers, he always had a solution. I was surpurised about that. He had a lot of experience so I envy him. These days I lik him because I know that he is always tried about our work.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!

Happy Tuesday!

I guess just like what I\'ve told you during one of our conversations your boss might be grouchy but deep inside, he is also a good man, right?

I believe that humans  have innate goodness in their hearts.  

See you in class!

T. Lynn

 

Q. How do you deal with co-workers that you do not get along with?
A. In this case, I become a nice woman to them because I want to have a good first impression to them.

>> correct

Let me tell you about my team leader.

>> correct
I had a bad first impression on him.

>>I had a bad first impression of him.
He always played games on the internet during working hours.

>>correct
However, when I had some problems with my co-workers,he always had a solution.

>>correct
I was surpurised about that.

>>I was surprised about that.
He had a lot of experience so I envy him.

>>correct
These days I lik him because I know that he is always tried about our work.

>>These days I like him because I know that he tries his best at work.

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