Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
I misunderstood the essay question yesterday.
I was confused. I'm so sorry.^^
I saw the eggs that were posted on the website.
They are really good.
How could Power English teachers make them well?
I voted for something. I will tell you tomorrow.^^
What bugs you the most about air travel? (Example: long queue at the airport, delayed flights, etc.)
I kind of like air travel.
However, one thing bugs me during air travel.
It usually takes five to six hours to get to Southeast Asia, the place I love to go.
I can stand well the first two or three hours.
However, my legs starts to be swollen if it is over three hours.
It could get better if I move and exercise, but the space in the flight is too cramped to exercise.
I'd like go backpacking around Europe, but I am afraid of air travel over than ten hours.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Don\'t worry about the previous essay question. I understand that it was a bit confusing for you.
Unfortunately, I cannot tell you which one is my egg and I\'m NOT allowed to give hints too. It\'s against the rules. ^^
Anyway, I\'m sure that you enjoyed browsing the pictures.
Check my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! I misunderstood the essay question yesterday.
>> CORRECT! I was confused.
>> CORRECT!
I\'m so sorry.^^
>> CORRECT! I saw the eggs that were posted on the website.
>> CORRECT! They are really good.
>> CORRECT! How could Power English teachers make them well?
>> How did the Power English teachers make them so well?I voted for something.
>> CORRECT!
I will tell you tomorrow.^^
>> CORRECT! I kind of like air travel.
>> CORRECT! However, one thing bugs me during air travel.
>> CORRECT! It usually takes five to six hours to get to Southeast Asia, the place I love to go.
>> It usually takes five to six hours to get to Southeast Asia, the place where I love to go.
I can stand well the first two or three hours.
>> I can endure the first two or three hours.However, my legs starts to be swollen if it is over three hours.
>> However, my legs start to swell after three hours of sitting on a plane.It could get better if I move and exercise, but the space in the flight is too cramped to exercise.
>> It would be better if I move around and do some stretching, but the plane is too cramped.I\'d like go backpacking around Europe, but I am afraid of air travel over than ten hours.
>> I\'d like to go backpacking around Europe, but I am afraid of over 10 hours of air travel.
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