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2016-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. I misunderstood the essay question yesterday. I was confused. I'm so sorry.^^ I saw the eggs that were posted on the website. They are really good. How could Power English teachers make them well? I voted for something. I will tell you tomorrow.^^ What bugs you the most about air travel? (Example: long queue at the airport, delayed flights, etc.) I kind of like air travel. However, one thing bugs me during air travel. It usually takes five to six hours to get to Southeast Asia, the place I love to go. I can stand well the first two or three hours. However, my legs starts to be swollen if it is over three hours. It could get better if I move and exercise, but the space in the flight is too cramped to exercise. I'd like go backpacking around Europe, but I am afraid of air travel over than ten hours.

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Hello Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Don\'t worry about the previous essay question. I understand that it was a bit confusing for you. Unfortunately, I cannot tell you which one is my egg and I\'m NOT allowed to give hints too. It\'s against the rules. ^^ Anyway, I\'m sure that you enjoyed browsing the pictures.   Check my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I misunderstood the essay question yesterday. >> CORRECT! I was confused. >> CORRECT! I\'m so sorry.^^ >> CORRECT! I saw the eggs that were posted on the website. >> CORRECT! They are really good. >> CORRECT! How could Power English teachers make them well? >> How did the Power English teachers make them so well?I voted for something. >> CORRECT! I will tell you tomorrow.^^ >> CORRECT! I kind of like air travel. >> CORRECT! However, one thing bugs me during air travel. >> CORRECT! It usually takes five to six hours to get to Southeast Asia, the place I love to go. >> It usually takes five to six hours to get to Southeast Asia, the place where I love to go. I can stand well the first two or three hours. >> I can endure the first two or three hours.However, my legs starts to be swollen if it is over three hours. >> However, my legs start to swell after three hours of sitting on a plane.It could get better if I move and exercise, but the space in the flight is too cramped to exercise. >> It would be better if I move around and do some stretching, but the plane is too cramped.I\'d like go backpacking around Europe, but I am afraid of air travel over than ten hours. >> I\'d like to go backpacking around Europe, but I am afraid of over 10 hours of air travel.  

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