Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
As I told you, I'm going to give a presentation today.
Do you believe I will do it well?
I wish I do it very well.
What are you grateful for every day? Why?
The book related to thanks has been popular in Korea.
I believe that grateful attitude for every day life makes our lives happier.
I am profoundly grateful for my family member's healthy.
My parents are really healthy and still enjoy exercising.
My son is also healthy even though he sometimes get cold.
However, I have one concern about my husband's healthy.
I heard that he eats out at every meal because of his poor cooking.
Of course, he's still healthy.
That's obviously what I have to thank.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! I don\'t just believe, I KNOW that you will do well in that presentation. You\'re going to do just fine. Show them what you got.
Good luck!
Please take note of my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! As I told you, I\'m going to give a presentation today.
>> CORRECT! Do you believe I will do it well?
>> Do you think I can do well?I wish I do it very well.
>> I wish I could do well.The book related to thanks has been popular in Korea.
>> The book about being thankful is popular in Korea.I believe that grateful attitude for every day life makes our lives happier.
>> I believe that being grateful for our every day life makes our lives happier. I am profoundly grateful for my family member\'s healthy.
>> I am profoundly grateful for my family\'s good health.
My parents are really healthy and still enjoy exercising.
>> CORRECT! My son is also healthy even though he sometimes get cold.
>> My son is also healthy, even though he would sometimes catch a cold.However, I have one concern about my husband\'s healthy.
>> However, I have one concern about my husband\'s health.I heard that he eats out at every meal because of his poor cooking.
>> I heard that he eats out for every meal because of his poor cooking.Of course, he\'s still healthy.
>> CORRECT! That\'s obviously what I have to thank.
>> That\'s obviously something that I have to be thankful for.
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