Homework

2016-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. As I told you, I'm going to give a presentation today. Do you believe I will do it well? I wish I do it very well. What are you grateful for every day? Why? The book related to thanks has been popular in Korea. I believe that grateful attitude for every day life makes our lives happier. I am profoundly grateful for my family member's healthy. My parents are really healthy and still enjoy exercising. My son is also healthy even though he sometimes get cold. However, I have one concern about my husband's healthy. I heard that he eats out at every meal because of his poor cooking. Of course, he's still healthy. That's obviously what I have to thank.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! I don\'t just believe, I KNOW that you will do well in that presentation. You\'re going to do just fine. Show them what you got. Good luck! Please take note of my corrections here. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! As I told you, I\'m going to give a presentation today. >> CORRECT! Do you believe I will do it well? >> Do you think I can do well?I wish I do it very well. >> I wish I could do well.The book related to thanks has been popular in Korea. >> The book about being thankful is popular in Korea.I believe that grateful attitude for every day life makes our lives happier. >> I believe that being grateful for our every day life makes our lives happier. I am profoundly grateful for my family member\'s healthy. >> I am profoundly grateful for my family\'s good health. My parents are really healthy and still enjoy exercising. >> CORRECT! My son is also healthy even though he sometimes get cold. >> My son is also healthy, even though he would sometimes catch a cold.However, I have one concern about my husband\'s healthy. >> However, I have one concern about my husband\'s health.I heard that he eats out at every meal because of his poor cooking. >> I heard that he eats out for every meal because of his poor cooking.Of course, he\'s still healthy. >> CORRECT! That\'s obviously what I have to thank. >> That\'s obviously something that I have to be thankful for.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·