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2016-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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My favorite time with my family is when we travel togerther. I can't forget to visit Japan with my family. It was our first time. There were many clean street and many tall bildings. Also Japaness people were very kind. Anyway also I like with my family a long conversation time. We talked when had dinner. We usually had an everyday conversation but it was very special time. I want to be happy with my family for many years to come.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms. [이름]! A blessed Thursday morning! Wow! I was so happy when I logged in and saw your name on my page. Thank you for making your homework immediately. Yes, doing things with our family is always memorable no matter how simple or ordinary it is. Just spending time with them talking, eating or simply doing household chores together makes it special. I wish that you\'ll spend long happy years with your family. See you in class later! T. Lynn   My favorite time with my family is when we travel togerther. >>correct grammar (spelling: together)I can\'t forget to visit Japan with my family.>> I can\'t forget our visit to Japan. It was our first time. >>correctThere were many clean street and many tall bildings. >>There were many clean streets and many tall buildings.Also, Japaness people were very kind. >> Also, the Japanese people were very kind.Anyway also I like with my family a long conversation time. >>I also like having long conversation with my family.We talked when had dinner. >> We talk whenever we have dinner together.We usually had an everyday conversation but it was very special time. >> We usually talk about our daily lives but it is a very special time. OR>> We usually talk about what happened during the day. I want to be happy with my family for many years to come. >> correct

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