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People usually think that practicing sports is good for children who are in period of growth and we can easily find that parents have their children do sports when they have time. Surely practicing sports is excellent to help growth, however I have ever heard of advantages and disadvantages of this. Advantages encouraging them are about helping a growth. Especially it is helpful to grow height. For example, one of my cousins has usually been enjoyed playing the basketball whenever he had time since he was young. As a result, he is 185cm more although his parents are not tall. On the other hand, my younger brother is smaller than him though my parents are tall. So doing exercise is effective to increase a growth. But if children practice strong sports, it can bring side effect. Some of my classmates who did exercise from young age are not tall. And actually my friend agreed with it. In short, proper amount of practicing sports is good for children’s growth

Hello [이름]! ^^   You wrote a good essay about the effects of sports in children. Well done. ~~~ Don\'t hesitate to ask me about any questions you might have about the corrections. They are just paraphrasing to make the sentences more interesting and clear. ^^   See you later, alligator~~~   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     People usually think that practicing sports is good for children who are in period of growth and we can easily find that parents have their children do sports when they have time. >> People usually think that practicing sports is good for children who are in their period of growth and we can easily find parents who encourage their children to take up a sport in their leisure time.   Surely practicing sports is excellent to help growth, however I have ever heard of advantages and disadvantages of this. >> Surely practicing sports is excellent for children\'s development but there are advantages and disadvantages to this.   Advantages encouraging them are about helping a growth. Especially it is helpful to grow height. For example, one of my cousins has usually been enjoyed playing the basketball whenever he had time since he was young. As a result, he is 185cm more although his parents are not tall. On the other hand, my younger brother is smaller than him though my parents are tall. >> Some advantages that can be cited is the growth spurt attained in playing sports. For example, I have a cousin who enjoys playing basketball eversince he was young and as a result, his height is more than 185cm although his parents aren\'t that tall. Comparing that example to my brother who didn\'t play much and is shorter than him although our parents are tall.   So doing exercise is effective to increase a growth. But if children practice strong sports, it can bring side effect. Some of my classmates who did exercise from young age are not tall. And actually my friend agreed with it. In short, proper amount of practicing sports is good for children’s growth >> From my example, it shows that exercise is effective in supplementing growth spurts. However, when children practice sports that require strength, it may lead to negative effects. Some of my classmates who did this at a young age is proof of this and in addition, my friend attested to this. My point is that enough or adequate practicing of sports is beneficial for children\'s growth.