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2016-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I agree. Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication. Because we can misunderstand meaning with other types of communication. However nowadays many people are using as email, text message or phone calls because many people are very busy. So many companies are competing to develop this technology.

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  Hi there Ms. [이름]! A blessed Tuesday to you! I guess we can\'t live without new technologies nowadays. But I hope families and friends will still find time to be together and chat face to face not only online. Stay healthy! ~T. Lynn   I agree. >> correctFace-to-face communication is better than other types of communication. >>correctBecause we can misunderstand meaning with other types of communication. >>Because wa can misunderstand each other with other types of communication.However nowadays many people are using as email, text message or phone calls because many people are very busy. >>However nowadays many people are using email, text message or phone calls because many people are very busy. OR>> However nowadays many people are using email, text message or phone calls because they are busy.So many companies are competing to develop this technology. >>correct

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