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2016-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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1. Q: Do you live in small house? A: No, I don't. I live in an apartment. 2. Q: Where are you? A: In New York in the United States. 3. Q: Do you live with family? A: I don't live with anyone. I live alone. 4. Q: Idon't know ㅜㅜ sorry A: Two. There is mine which is a double and there is another small one which I use for guests. 5. Q: Is there a room? A: No, there isn't, but there is a small balcony where I go when the weather is nice. 6. Q: I don't know A: No, not very. I pay about $200 a week for it. 7. Q: Do you have a pet? A: Yes I do. I have a small cat called Zoe who is very temperamental. 8. Q: Sorry..ㅜㅜ A: On the 8th. I have a great view. 9. Q: Sorry..ㅜㅜ A: Let's see. It was about three years ago. It was the first apartment I saw and I loved it immediately. 10. Q: Do you like coffee? A: Yes, I do. I like it very much.

강사 첨삭

Hello again, [이름]! ^^


Aw!

You still did you best to come up with questions which will answer the provided responses.

What do you think is more difficult, making questions or answering questions? kiki


Take care.

See you later.

~~~ T. Heidi ^_^


1. Q: Do you live in small house?
A: No, I don\'t. I live in an apartment.
>>> Correct!
2. Q: Where are you?
A: In New York in the United States.
>>> Correct!
 3. Q: Do you live with family?
A: I don\'t live with anyone. I live alone.
>>> Correct!

BETTER:

>>> Do you live with your family?
 4. Q: Idon\'t know ㅜㅜ sorry
A: Two. There is mine which is a double and there is another small one which I use for guests.
>>> How many beds are in your pad?
 5. Q: Is there a room?
A: No, there isn\'t, but there is a small balcony where I go when the weather is nice.
>>> Correct!

OR: 

>>> Is there a garden?
 6. Q: I don\'t know
A: No, not very. I pay about $200 a week for it.
>>> Is it very expensive?
7. Q: Do you have a pet?
A: Yes I do. I have a small cat called Zoe who is very temperamental.
>>> Correct!
8. Q: Sorry..ㅜㅜ
A: On the 8th. I have a great view.
>>> When will you move to your new house?
9. Q: Sorry..ㅜㅜ
A: Let\'s see. It was about three years ago. It was the first apartment I saw and I loved it immediately.
>>> When did you move here?
10. Q: Do you like coffee?
A: Yes, I do. I like it very much.

>>> Correct!

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