Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
Happy Easter!
I don't have a religion, but I know Easter Day.
I used to go to a church to get a boiled egg every Easter Day when I was a child.
That was one of my fond memories in my childhood.
What do you dislike most about modern life? Why?
I'm kind of satisfied with modern life.
As everybody knows, modern people fully enjoy modern civilization.
However, there are some undesired aspects as well.
Most of all, we lost our composure because of busy life in modern society.
We always don't have enough time to do something, and time became the subject of being managed by people.
I think being pressed for time is dark side of modern life.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Good to know that you are aware of the Easter Day celebration and tradition.
Thanks for doing your homework. Please check my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! Happy Easter!
>> CORRECT! I don\'t have a religion, but I know Easter Day.
>> CORRECT! I used to go to a church to get a boiled egg every Easter Day when I was a child.
>> CORRECT! That was one of my fond memories in my childhood.
>> That was one of the fond memories of my childhood.I\'m kind of satisfied with modern life.
>> CORRECT! As everybody knows, modern people fully enjoy modern civilization.
>> Everyone knows that modern people fully enjoy the modern civilization.However, there are some undesired aspects as well.
>> However, there are some undesirable aspects as well.
Most of all, we lost our composure because of busy life in modern society.
>> The worst of them all is losing our composure because of our busy lives in this modern society. We always don\'t have enough time to do something, and time became the subject of being managed by people.
>> CORRECT! I think being pressed for time is dark side of modern life.
>> I think being pressed for time is the dark side of modern life.
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