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2016-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I want to buy a new apartment which is very expensive so it is not easy to achieve. I have to take care of my children for example they have to go to the university so I have to save money and spend money for my children. So that is why it is not eaasy to achieve buying the apartment.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!

You are a mom so of course you worry about your children\'s future. But I know you\'d be able to achieve whatever goal you put your mind into. Wow! you are making excellent sentences. Way to go Ms. [이름]!

Have a nice day!

T. Lynn

 

I want to buy a new apartment which is very expensive so it is not easy to achieve.

>>correct
I have to take care of my children for example they have to go to the university so I have to save money and spend money for my children.

>>I have to take care of my children. They have to go to the university so I have to save money but I also have to spend money on my children.

OR>> I have to take care of my children. I need to prepare for their college education so I need to save money for that. But I also have to spend money on them now.
So that is why it is not eaasy to achieve buying the apartment.

>>correct grammar SPELLING: EASY

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