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2016-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I agree because in my case, I want to buy a new apartment destite I have my apartment. My close friends have a new expensive house so I always envy her. I have to change my idea but it is very difficult.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름]! Well, everybody has wishes and hopes. Things that we like to have or achieve. That\'s okay, it helps us to focus on what\'s important. Have a blessed day! T. Lynn   I agree because in my case, I want to buy a new apartment destite I have my apartment. >>I agree because in my case, I want to buy a new apartment despite having an apartment already.My close friends have a new expensive house so I always envy her. >>My close friend have a new expensive house so I envy her. OR>> My close friends have new expensive houses so I envy them.I have to change my idea but it is very difficult. >>I have to change how I think but it is very difficult.

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