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2016-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Yes, I agree. Laguhter can make good hormones entitle endorphin. It stays healthy in our body. However, these days many people don't do laughter lots. Also me too. I think it is not easy because they have a lot of stresses. I suggest that you have a relxy time with your trip.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!

Yes, I agree with you. Laughter is free and it can give us benefits. So why don\'t we laugh as much as we can. Problems will always be there. It\'s best not to worry too much.

Have a great day!

T. Lynn

 

Yes, I agree.

>>correct
Laguhter can make good hormones entitle endorphin.

>>Laughter can make good hormone called endorphin.

OR>> Laughter can produce good hormone called endorphin.
It stays healthy in our body.

>>It keeps our body healthy.
However, these days many people don\'t do laughter lots. Also me too.

>>However, these days many people don\'t laugh a lot. Me too.
I think it is not easy because they have a lot of stresses.

>>I think it is not easy because they have a lot of stress.
I suggest that you have a relxy time with your trip.

>>I suggest that you have a relaxing trip.

OR>> I suggest a trip for relaxation.

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