homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름]!
I heard about AlphaGo making a buzz in Korea. I heard also that many people became interested in this traditional Korean game after the match between AlphaGo and Lee Sedol. I guess it\'s a good thing right?
Have a wonderful day!
T. Lynn
A few days ago, AlphaGo, Google DeepMind and Lee Sedol who is champion of go played a match.
>> A few days ago, AlphaGo of Google Deepmind and Lee Sedol, who is a champion Go Player, played the game.
AlphaGo won.
>>correct
In my opinion, technology is very important in our lives and has made the world a better place to live.
>>In my opinion, technology is very important in our lives and it has made the world a better place to live in.
However I don\'t want to win a machine more than human.
>>However, I don\'t want a machine to win over humans.
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