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2016-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Never, never givp up studying English!!! I am not smart so I need a lot of time for studying. It helps to become my brain smart.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

A wonderful Monday to you!

I\'m happy to hear you are never giving up in studying English. It means we will be friends for a long time.

I read somewhere that studying another language helps to keep our brain active which in turn help our memory.

See you in class later!

Have a nice day,

T. Lynn

 

Never, never givp up studying English!!!

>>I will never, never give up studying English.
I am not smart so I need a lot of time for studying.

>>correct

OR>> I am not smart so I need a lot of time to study.
It helps to become my brain smart.

>>It helps to keep my brain smart.

OR>> It helps to keep my brain active.

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