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I want to be a professional nurse in rehabilitation part. I can speak in English very well better than now. I will be a graduated school student and study diligently. I will got a degree, certificate and license about my field. And than I will stand in front of people to teach my knowledge.

Hello [이름], Thank you for answering your homework. I admire you because even though how busy you are, you still want to learn a lot of things like playing the piano. ^^ Keep it up! Teacher Sophia   Here are your corrections: I want to be a professional nurse in rehabilitation part. >> I want to be an expert, competent and proficient nurse in a rehabilitation center.I can speak in English very well better than now. >> I can speak in English better than now.I will be a graduated school student and study diligently. >> I will be studying diligently in the Graduate school.I will got a degree, certificate and license about my field. >> I will be a licensed nurse.And than I will stand in front of people to teach my knowledge. >> I also want to share my knowledge to other people.