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2016-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Right! I also want to look for the cheapest product when I need to buy something. So I spent a lot of time to search it on the website but when I think about the time and include delivery fee, the product's price is almost same as the first price.. and also I noticed that the price is cheap, I got cheaper product.. but it is not always like this. Sometimes I get a good product with cheap price. Just don't think that the cheapest thing is the best..through my experience..hehe 1. Tom was told many times to stop talking in class. (tell) 2. He was disappointed by the movie. (disappoint) 3. He was convinced by his brother to go to the beach. (convince) 4. The present was given to her by her co-worker. (give) 5. The thief was cought by the police. (catch)

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

I\'ve also been wary of products that are too cheap.

In the Philippines, when we see a product that is cheaper than usual,

we think that it must have been made in China.

But then, I\'ve also experienced buying products that are way too expensive for no reason.

I really don\'t trust myself when shopping. ^^;

Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

Have a wonderful day!

Teacher Anne

 

Right! I also want to look for the cheapest product when I need to buy something.

>> Correct!
So I spent a lot of time to search it on the website

>> Correct! 

but when I think about the time and include delivery fee, the product\'s price is almost same as the first price..

>> But when I think about the time including the delivery fee, the product\'s price is almost the same as it\'s previous price.
and also I noticed that the price is cheap, I got cheaper product..

>> and I also noticed that if the price is cheap, I would also get an even cheaper product.
but it is not always like this. Sometimes I get a good product with cheap price.

>> Correct!
Just don\'t think that the cheapest thing is the best..through my experience..hehe
>> I just don\'t think that the cheapest thing is the best, in my experience. Hehe.
1. Tom was told many times to stop talking in class. (tell)

>> Correct
2. He was disappointed by the movie. (disappoint)

>> Correct!
3. He was convinced by his brother to go to the beach. (convince)

>> Correct!
4. The present was given to her by her co-worker. (give)

>> Correct!
5. The thief was cought by the police. (catch)

>> Correct! [caught]

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