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2016-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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I don't think that the person who was the best in school would earn a lot of money. Just the percentage of success will come closer to us when we get good scores and good results. It depends on people's luck and efforts. 1. This city is a really good place to live. 2. He's really friendly. 3. I have a dog, and my neighbors have dogs as well. 4. Did you hear about the dogs that saved the little girl's life? 5. Would you like a glass of juice?

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Hi Miss [이름]! I think it is a common misconception that the smartest kid would earn the most amount of money in the future. But it\'s too bad because many are now saying they don\'t want to study because they want to be rich by putting up their own business. While it can be true for some, I think it is still important to finish school before taking a risk. After all, education can still be helpful in many ways. ^^; And you are right! It really depends on a person\'s effort and sometimes luck. ^^ See you tomorrow! Teacher Anne    I don\'t think that the person who was the best in school would earn a lot of money. >> Correct!Just the percentage of success will come closer to us when we get good scores and good results. >> It\'s just that a they have a bigger chance of succeeding when they get good scores and good results. It depends on people\'s luck and efforts.>> Correct!1. This city is a really good place to live. >> Correct!2. He\'s really friendly. >> Correct!3. I have a dog, and my neighbors have dogs as well. >> Correct!4. Did you hear about the dogs that saved the little girl\'s life? >> Correct!5. Would you like a glass of juice? >> Correct!

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