Homework

Hello, teacher. Could you read and review my composition? This is for my paper which I'm trying to publish in next month. Title : Statesman, King Seong(成宗)'s Policy of Buddhism --> Here, is it okay that there is no 'a' or 'the' in front of 'Statesman'? How about this composotion below? This paper will focus the Statesman, King Seongjong's politics that he resolved the political issues of the time through mediating between various political actors in his leading position, by reviewing the discussions about the abolition of buddhist monks law(度僧法).

Hello Kaylee! I checked your composition below. Please review my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Could you read and review my composition? >> CORRECT! This is for my paper which I\'m trying to publish in next month. >> This is for my paper which I\'m trying to publish next month. Title : Statesman, King Seong(成宗)\'s Policy of Buddhism >> CORRECT! --> Here, is it okay that there is no \'a\' or \'the\' in front of \'Statesman\'? >> CORRECT! *I\'m not sure about this since I have no idea what is the context of your \"title\". You could use either \"the\" or \"a\" depending on the context.How about this composotion below? >> CORRECT! >> compositionThis paper will focus the Statesman, King Seongjong\'s politics that he resolved the political issues of the time through mediating between various political actors in his leading position, by reviewing the discussions about the abolition of buddhist monks law(度僧法). >> This paper will focus on the Statesman, King Seongjong\'s politics, that he used to resolved the political issues of the time through mediating between various political actors in his leading position, by reviewing the discussions about the abolition of the buddhist monks\' law(度僧法).