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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I totally agree with you! Our parents are our first teachers. They teach us to be a good person. I believe that all parents want the best for their children. As you do.
See you in class!
T. Lynn
After you born, you can meet your parent, it is your frist time.
>> After you were born, you meet your parents for the first time.
Listening, watching and speaking become to meet through your parent.
>>Listening, watching and speaking become possible because of your parents.
Of course these are your frist time.
>>Of course this is your first time.
So you learn a lot of things to your parent and so many parents try to become good parent.
>>So you learn a lot of things from your parents and so many parents try to become good parents.
Also parents teach many good things for their children.
>>Also parents teach their children good things.
so that is reason why parents are the best teachers.
>>So that is the reason why parents are the best teachers.
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