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2016-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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I understand why some parents want to taketheir kids to contryside but I won't do it. That is the reality so kids also need to ajust with the enviorment.. I will grow y kids in the big city. 1. They had three kids in their family. 2. I kept thinking about the movie I saw last night. 3. Our apartment is too small. We don't have any room for guests. 4. By the time he came looking for her, she had gone. 5. There are many children in this city that live with poverty.

강사 첨삭

Hi Miss [이름]!

There\'s always something for everyone.

I remember my friend saying the same thing (she wants her kids to grow in a city).

That way, they would somehow be better when it comes to competing for a job.

In my experience, kids who grew up in a city were more sure of themselves.

So, I definitely agree with your answer. ^^;

I hope Ha Yeul and your mom will be well soon. ^^;

Take care!

Teacher Anne

 

I understand why some parents want to taketheir kids to contryside but I won\'t do it.

>> Correct! [take their]; [countryside]
That is the reality so kids also need to ajust with the enviorment..

>> Correct! [adjust]; [environment]
I will grow y kids in the big city.

>> I will raise my kids in the big city.
1. They had three kids in their family.

>> Correct!
2. I kept thinking about the movie I saw last night.

>> Correct!
3. Our apartment is too small. We don\'t have any room for guests.

>> Correct!
4. By the time he came looking for her, she had gone.

>> By the time he came looking for her, she was gone.
5. There are many children in this city that live with poverty.

>> Correct!

 

 

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