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Hi Miss [이름]!
There\'s always something for everyone.
I remember my friend saying the same thing (she wants her kids to grow in a city).
That way, they would somehow be better when it comes to competing for a job.
In my experience, kids who grew up in a city were more sure of themselves.
So, I definitely agree with your answer. ^^;
I hope Ha Yeul and your mom will be well soon. ^^;
Take care!
Teacher Anne
I understand why some parents want to taketheir kids to contryside but I won\'t do it.
>> Correct! [take their]; [countryside]
That is the reality so kids also need to ajust with the enviorment..
>> Correct! [adjust]; [environment]
I will grow y kids in the big city.
>> I will raise my kids in the big city.
1. They had three kids in their family.
>> Correct!
2. I kept thinking about the movie I saw last night.
>> Correct!
3. Our apartment is too small. We don\'t have any room for guests.
>> Correct!
4. By the time he came looking for her, she had gone.
>> By the time he came looking for her, she was gone.
5. There are many children in this city that live with poverty.
>> Correct!
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