homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!
I guess you\'re correct. Usually when you say Korean dish, the first word that comes to mind is spicy. Well, I\'ve tried some Korean food like Samgyeopsal, Korean barbecue, Kimchi stew and Bibimbap. These are all yummy.
Have a nice day!
~T. Lynn
Many foreigner think that Korean food are mostly spicy and salty, also they are not good for our health.
>>Many foreigners think that Korean food are mostly spicy and salty and that they are not good for our health.
However tradition foods of my country are variety.
>> However we have a variety of traditional Korean food.
My favorite food is samgyeopsal.
>>correct
So my family want to eat it every weekend.
>>So my family wants to eat it every weekend.
However Bulgogi is the best it is very delicious and yummy.
>>However, Bulgogi is the best. It is very delicious.
NOTE: Delicious and yummy are synonyms. The meaning is the same.
I hope that tradition foods of my country will be very famous in the world.
>>I hope that traditional Korean foods will be very famous in the world.
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