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2016-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. I saw the Easter Day eggs contest results on the website. Your eggs are really cute.^^ I'm so sorry that you didn't get the prize. Remember! I like yours. What was the weirdest food you've ever eaten? Explain in detail. Do you like coriander? Some Korean people, including me, dislike coriander. However, coriander is favorite ingredient in Southeast Asia such as Thailand and Vietnam. I've been to Vietnam and tried rice noodle, one of the Vietnam traditional foods. Vietnamese enjoy eating coriander when they eat rice noodles, but I didn't know that. I ordered one bowl of rice noodle without any specific demand, and I got one bowl of rice noodle with fully coriander smell. I couldn't stand the weird smell and taste, and finally gave up eating it. Coriander is still my most weird ingredient.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thank you for appreciating the egg that I hastily and mindlessly designed. Haha! I told you I\'m not very creative. I\'m sorry to hear about your bad experience in Vietnam with coriander. Actually, I recently made a recipe with coriander in it. It\'s called quinoa tabbouleh. I guess coriander is an acquired taste (and smell). I like it though. I\'m trying to eat healthy, that\'s why I always try different kinds of vegetables and herbs every now and then. Thanks for doing your homework! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~    Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! I saw the Easter Day eggs contest results on the website. >> CORRECT! Your eggs are really cute.^^ >> CORRECT! I\'m so sorry that you didn\'t get the prize. >> CORRECT! Remember! I like yours. >> Remember: I like yours!Do you like coriander? >> CORRECT! Some Korean people, including me, dislike coriander. >> CORRECT! However, coriander is favorite ingredient in Southeast Asia such as Thailand and Vietnam. >> However, coriander is a popular ingredient in Southeast Asia, such as in Thailand and Vietnam. I\'ve been to Vietnam and tried rice noodle, one of the Vietnam traditional foods. >> I\'ve been to Vietnam and I\'ve tried rice noodles, which is a Vietnamese traditional food.Vietnamese enjoy eating coriander when they eat rice noodles, but I didn\'t know that. >> CORRECT! I ordered one bowl of rice noodle without any specific demand, and I got one bowl of rice noodle with fully coriander smell. >> I ordered one bowl of rice noodles without any specific demands, and I got one with a very strong smell of coriander. I couldn\'t stand the weird smell and taste, and finally gave up eating it. >> CORRECT! Coriander is still my most weird ingredient. >> Coriander is still the weirdest food for me.  

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