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2016-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher, There are a lot of colds going around. I still have a runny nose even after taking the medicine for three days. It's really uncomfortable to study. What is your favorite quote? Why? I like one sentence of the book, Mencius. That is "You can correct other people after you get right yourself". This means that being right is the first action you have to before you interfere in other's business. According to this saying, we are not qualified to point other people's faults out because we are not enough right. I always emphasize this saying to my son when I want to give the message that he must try to be a right person.

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Hi Kaylee! Take good care of yourself. You don\'t want to get sick in spring season! How could you go out, bask in the sun and enjoy the breathtaking scenery if you\'re down with colds? Thanks for doing your homework. Keep up the good work! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher, >> Hello, teacher. There are a lot of colds going around. >> The cold virus has been going around. I still have a runny nose even after taking the medicine for three days. >> CORRECT! It\'s really uncomfortable to study. >> CORRECT! I like one sentence of the book, Mencius. >> CORRECT! That is \"You can correct other people after you get it right yourself\". >> CORRECT! This means that being right is the first action you have to before you interfere in other\'s business. >> This means that being right is the first action you have to do before you interfere in other\'s business. According to this saying, we are not qualified to point other people\'s faults out because we are not enough right. >> According to this saying, we are not qualified to point out other people\'s faults because we are not completely right. I always emphasize this saying to my son when I want to give the message that he must try to be a right person. >> I always emphasize this saying to my son when I want to give him a message about being a righteous person.  

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