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When we play video games which are violent, we cant feel that we are doing bad.
We can experience the situations that we haven't done in reality but it is like a real.
Sometimes it makes us confused. The vision is important for us to do something.
We see that moment which is not good over and over then we can't feel that we are doing bad things.
1.The man who cooked the meal for us is Italian.
2. The city where she was born is not far from here.
3. The dog whose paw was broken is feeling better.
4. Many of the people who lost money on the stock market are now poor.
5. The neighbor who flowers I used to water moved away.
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Hi Miss [이름]!
I also believe that the media we are exposed into can affect our thinking.
They also say that a man\'s personality shows when he plays video games.
But these games keep on developing.
But I hope that somehow, people will realize how these simple games can affect them.
Thanks for sharing your opinion!
Have a wonderful day!
Teacher Anne
When we play video games which are violent, we cant feel that we are doing bad.
>> When we play video games whicha re violent, we can\'t feel that we are doimg something bad.We can experience the situations that we haven\'t done in reality but it is like a real.
>> We can experience the situations that we haven\'t done in reality but it is like a reality.Sometimes it makes us confused. The vision is important for us to do something.
>> Correct!We see that moment which is not good over and over then we can\'t feel that we are doing bad things.>> We see that moment which is not good over and over and then we can\'t feel that we are doing bad things.1.The man who cooked the meal for us is Italian.
>> Correct!2. The city where she was born is not far from here.
>> Correct!3. The dog whose paw was broken is feeling better.
>> Correct!4. Many of the people who lost money on the stock market are now poor.
>> Correct!5. The neighbor who flowers I used to water moved away.
>> whose
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