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I remembered when I was in Australia. I live far from the city so I should took a bus
early. At that time I was so tired so I was late for my school. I was in a hurry to get the bus. My neighbor saw me that I was in a hurry. She gave me a ride to the city.
I hadn't seen her but she helped me.
I cant forget her!
1. I went to the tourist office to get a few information.
2. Kids today spend so much time on the internet!
3. He has a good job and makes a large amount of money.
4. OK, let's do it! But hurry up I don't have much time!
5. I only know a few people in this city.
강사 첨삭
Hi Miss [이름]!
A simple act of kindness is something that can never be forgotten. ^^;
It\'s always wonderful to hear stories like that.
Have you met her after what happened?
If only people would be more kind to each other,
I think the world would become much more beautiful. ^^;
Thanks for sharing a good story!
Take care!
Teacher Anne
I remembered when I was in Australia.
>> Correct!
I live far from the city so I should took a bus early.
>> I lived far from the city so I should have taken a bus early.
At that time I was so tired so I was late for my school.
>> At that time, I was so tired so I was late for school.
I was in a hurry to get the bus.
>> I was in a hurry to get to the bus stop.
My neighbor saw me that I was in a hurry.
>> My neighbor saw that I was in a hurry.
She gave me a ride to the city.
>> Correct!I hadn\'t seen her but she helped me.
>> Correct!I cant forget her!
>> Correct! [can\'t]1. I went to the tourist office to get a few information.
>> Correct!2. Kids today spend so much time on the internet!
>> Correct!3. He has a good job and makes a large amount of money.
>> Correct!4. OK, let\'s do it! But hurry up I don\'t have much time!
>> Correct!5. I only know a few people in this city.
>> Correct!
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