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2016-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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I remembered when I was in Australia. I live far from the city so I should took a bus early. At that time I was so tired so I was late for my school. I was in a hurry to get the bus. My neighbor saw me that I was in a hurry. She gave me a ride to the city. I hadn't seen her but she helped me. I cant forget her! 1. I went to the tourist office to get a few information. 2. Kids today spend so much time on the internet! 3. He has a good job and makes a large amount of money. 4. OK, let's do it! But hurry up I don't have much time! 5. I only know a few people in this city.

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Hi Miss [이름]!  A simple act of kindness is something that can never be forgotten. ^^; It\'s always wonderful to hear stories like that. Have you met her after what happened? If only people would be more kind to each other, I think the world would become much more beautiful. ^^; Thanks for sharing a good story! Take care! Teacher Anne   I remembered when I was in Australia. >> Correct! I live far from the city so I should took a bus early. >> I lived far from the city so I should have taken a bus early. At that time I was so tired so I was late for my school. >> At that time, I was so tired so I was late for school. I was in a hurry to get the bus. >> I was in a hurry to get to the bus stop. My neighbor saw me that I was in a hurry. >> My neighbor saw that I was in a hurry. She gave me a ride to the city. >> Correct!I hadn\'t seen her but she helped me. >> Correct!I cant forget her! >> Correct! [can\'t]1. I went to the tourist office to get a few information. >> Correct!2. Kids today spend so much time on the internet! >> Correct!3. He has a good job and makes a large amount of money. >> Correct!4. OK, let\'s do it! But hurry up I don\'t have much time! >> Correct!5. I only know a few people in this city. >> Correct!

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