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2016-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hi! Today I want to share my feelings to you. I was really sad when I heared the news from you. I am really comfortable whenever I share my stories to you. As you told me, I also feel like we are already friends. That is why, when I was in trouble, or in difficulties, I could share my feelings..Actually I felt better. You have encouraged me a lot not only English skills also life skills..^^ I really learn many things from you...Thanks so much! I can't describe how much I appreciate you.ㅜㅜ I need to study more to express myself..ㅜㅜ If it is ok, sometimes I want to know about you in future.. Really thanks!! Good luck with everything.. I will always pray for you.. 1. Q: Who knows about this? A: No one really knows about this. It's a secret. 2. Q: How many times did you tell him? A: I only told him once. 3. Q: How much do you eat? A: I eat a lot. 4. Q: Are you going to try hard? A: I always try to do my best. 5. Q: Did you call me? A: Yes, I called you many times .

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Hi Miss [이름]! I am so happy I met you in this school. I also felt free whenever I speak with you. Especially when you tell me about the difficulties you were going through. Thank you for trusting me. I want you to know that I really treasure every conversation with you. Stay strong and don\'t let life get you down! ^^; Keep on being awesome! Teacher Anne   Hi! Today I want to share my feelings to you. >> Correct!I was really sad when I heared the news from you. >> Correct! [heard]I am really comfortable whenever I share my stories to you. >> Correct!As you told me, I also feel like we are already friends. That is why, when I was in trouble, or in difficulties, I could share my feelings..Actually I felt better. >> Correct!You have encouraged me a lot not only English skills also life skills..^^ >>  You have encouraged me in a lot of ways, not only in my English skills, but also in life skills, ^^I really learn many things from you...Thanks so much! >> Correct!I can\'t describe how much I appreciate you.ㅜㅜ >> Correct!I need to study more to express myself..ㅜㅜ >> Correct!If it is ok, sometimes I want to know about you in future.. >> If it is OK, I would occasionally want to know more about you in the future.Really thanks!! Good luck with everything.. >> Thanks, really! Good luck with everything!I will always pray for you.. >> Correct!1. Q: Who knows about this?A: No one really knows about this. It\'s a secret. >> Correct!2. Q: How many times did you tell him?A: I only told him once. >> Correct!3. Q: How much do you eat?A: I eat a lot. >> Correct!4. Q: Are you going to try hard?A: I always try to do my best. >> Correct!5. Q: Did you call me?A: Yes, I called you many times . >> Correct!

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