homework
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I want it because my country has a lot of debts.
However poor countries have to pay debts because it is promise.
So they have to try to keep promise.
Anyway I worried about my future and my children's future because of my country's debts.
so I think many people in our country have to save money for the future.
I hope that my children live to be happy for many years to come.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
A wonderful Monday to you! How was your weekend? I miss you since we didn\'t have class today. I guess you are busy. But I\'ll see you in class
tomorrow, right? Thank you for doing your homework although you are busy.
Have a blessed day!
~T. Lynn
I want it because my country has a lot of debts.
>>correctHowever poor countries have to pay debts because it is promise.
>>However, poor countries have to pay their debts because it\'s a promise they made.So they have to try to keep promise.>>So they have to try to keep their promise.Anyway I worried about my future and my children\'s future because of my country\'s debts.
>>Anyway, I\'m worried about my future and my children\'s future because of my country\'s debts.so I think many people in our country have to save money for the future.
>>So, I think many people in our country have to save money for the future.I hope that my children live to be happy for many years to come.
>> I hope that my children will live a happy life for many years to come.
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