homework:^)
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Hello Charlie !!
I have a question from last homework
from your correction, are moreover and more so same?
I disagree with that playing a game is fun only when I win. I think how interesting a game is depends on process of playing a game. If a team is going to be winner with large gap would it be fun? The game might be boring while even though a team lost a game, they could surely feel excited through competing with opposition. Sometimes we can come into the title “big match” on some games. Most of matches are expected before starting. It shows us how people look forward to that game regardless of result. I’m positive it is the most interesting part of having a match.
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Hello there [이름]! ^^
Good questions. ~~~
As an adjective more so strictly means that to a greater degree, and so refers to an adjective or adverb used earlier.. Like in the previous homework, you hate armpit hair and your hate for it grows even more in the summer OR \"more so in the summer\"..
As a adverb moreover is a conjunctive meaning addition to what has been said.A synonym to it is furthermore. For example, armpit hair is unsightly, moreover OR furthermore, it helps in the increased growth of bacteria that leads to body odor.
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I have a question from last homework
from your correction, are moreover and more so same?
>> I have a question regarding the use of moreover and more so from the last homework correction; are they synonymous to each other?
I disagree with that playing a game is fun only when I win. I think how interesting a game is depends on process of playing a game.
>> I disagree about the idea that a game is only fun when I win because I think a game becomes interesting depending on how it is played.
If a team is going to be winner with large gap would it be fun? The game might be boring while even though a team lost a game, they could surely feel excited through competing with opposition.
>> Think of it this way, a game might be boring when there is a huge difference between the scores of the opposing teams but for the losing side, it was the most fun for them being able to have the chance to compete with the opposition.
Sometimes we can come into the title “big match” on some games. Most of matches are expected before starting. It shows us how people look forward to that game regardless of result. I’m positive it is the most interesting part of having a match.
>> There are even those times when we come across title matches or games described as \"the big one\" where people have predictions about them. This shows that people look forward to how a game or sport is played regardless of what the result would be so I am positive that this is what makes games fun and that it is not all about winning.
Good questions. ~~~
As an adjective more so strictly means that to a greater degree, and so refers to an adjective or adverb used earlier.. Like in the previous homework, you hate armpit hair and your hate for it grows even more in the summer OR \"more so in the summer\"..
As a adverb moreover is a conjunctive meaning addition to what has been said.A synonym to it is furthermore. For example, armpit hair is unsightly, moreover OR furthermore, it helps in the increased growth of bacteria that leads to body odor.
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I have a question from last homework
from your correction, are moreover and more so same?
>> I have a question regarding the use of moreover and more so from the last homework correction; are they synonymous to each other?
I disagree with that playing a game is fun only when I win. I think how interesting a game is depends on process of playing a game.
>> I disagree about the idea that a game is only fun when I win because I think a game becomes interesting depending on how it is played.
If a team is going to be winner with large gap would it be fun? The game might be boring while even though a team lost a game, they could surely feel excited through competing with opposition.
>> Think of it this way, a game might be boring when there is a huge difference between the scores of the opposing teams but for the losing side, it was the most fun for them being able to have the chance to compete with the opposition.
Sometimes we can come into the title “big match” on some games. Most of matches are expected before starting. It shows us how people look forward to that game regardless of result. I’m positive it is the most interesting part of having a match.
>> There are even those times when we come across title matches or games described as \"the big one\" where people have predictions about them. This shows that people look forward to how a game or sport is played regardless of what the result would be so I am positive that this is what makes games fun and that it is not all about winning.
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