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2016-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Good morning, teacher! The weather has been warm these days. I saw the full-blown cherry blossoms in my apartment's garden on my way to school. If the website has the function to upload pictures, I could show you those pictures. I'm so sorry that I couldn't do that. What colors do you like to dress in? Why? I love to dress in black and white. In my opinion, those colors make me look neat and tidy. As you already know, I had worked as an office worker over than 10 years. So, I have a lot of formal dresses in black and white. Of course, there are also a lot of different colors' formal dresses. However, other colors such as pink, red and violet are easy to be outdated after a while. Black and white are rather timeless than other colors, so I like those colors. Moreover, I think black and white go well with me.

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Hello Kaylee! Like you, I also have lots of black and white outfits. My favorite color is actually black. Surprisingly, though, I have lots of gray/silver clothes. I don\'t know why. I don\'t really like gray. Haha! I just realized that most of the clothes that I\'ve bought were either gray or some other shade of gray. Thanks for doing your homework! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good morning, teacher! >> CORRECT!The weather has been warm these days. >> The weather is getting warmer these days.I saw the full-blown cherry blossoms in my apartment\'s garden on my way to school. >> I saw the fully-bloomed cherry blossoms in my apartment\'s garden on my way to school. If the website has the function to upload pictures, I could show you those pictures. >> If I could upload and share some pictures on the website, I could show you some.I\'m so sorry that I couldn\'t do that. >> CORRECT! OR >> Too bad I couldn\'t do that. I love to dress in black and white. >> CORRECT!In my opinion, those colors make me look neat and tidy. >> CORRECT!As you already know, I had worked as an office worker over than 10 years. >> As you already know, I had worked as an office worker for over 10 years.So, I have a lot of formal dresses in black and white. >> CORRECT!Of course, there are also a lot of different colors\' formal dresses. >> Of course, there are also other colors of formal dresses.However, other colors such as pink, red and violet are easy to be outdated after a while. >> However, colors such as pink, red and violet easily get outdated after a while.Black and white are rather timeless than other colors, so I like those colors. >> Black and white are more timeless than other colors, so I like them.Moreover, I think black and white go well with me. >> CORRECT! OR >> Moreover, I think black and white suit me well.  

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