Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, teacher!
The weather has been warm these days.
I saw the full-blown cherry blossoms in my apartment's garden on my way to school.
If the website has the function to upload pictures, I could show you those pictures.
I'm so sorry that I couldn't do that.
What colors do you like to dress in? Why?
I love to dress in black and white.
In my opinion, those colors make me look neat and tidy.
As you already know, I had worked as an office worker over than 10 years.
So, I have a lot of formal dresses in black and white.
Of course, there are also a lot of different colors' formal dresses.
However, other colors such as pink, red and violet are easy to be outdated after a while.
Black and white are rather timeless than other colors, so I like those colors.
Moreover, I think black and white go well with me.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Like you, I also have lots of black and white outfits. My favorite color is actually black. Surprisingly, though, I have lots of gray/silver clothes. I don\'t know why.
I don\'t really like gray. Haha! I just realized that most of the clothes that I\'ve bought were either gray or some other shade of gray.
Thanks for doing your homework!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Good morning, teacher!
>> CORRECT!The weather has been warm these days.
>> The weather is getting warmer these days.I saw the full-blown cherry blossoms in my apartment\'s garden on my way to school.
>> I saw the fully-bloomed cherry blossoms in my apartment\'s garden on my way to school.
If the website has the function to upload pictures, I could show you those pictures.
>> If I could upload and share some pictures on the website, I could show you some.I\'m so sorry that I couldn\'t do that.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Too bad I couldn\'t do that.
I love to dress in black and white.
>> CORRECT!In my opinion, those colors make me look neat and tidy.
>> CORRECT!As you already know, I had worked as an office worker over than 10 years.
>> As you already know, I had worked as an office worker for over 10 years.So, I have a lot of formal dresses in black and white.
>> CORRECT!Of course, there are also a lot of different colors\' formal dresses.
>> Of course, there are also other colors of formal dresses.However, other colors such as pink, red and violet are easy to be outdated after a while.
>> However, colors such as pink, red and violet easily get outdated after a while.Black and white are rather timeless than other colors, so I like those colors.
>> Black and white are more timeless than other colors, so I like them.Moreover, I think black and white go well with me.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Moreover, I think black and white suit me well.
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