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Hi there Ms. [이름]!
How\'s the weather? Is it getting warmer?
Well, nowadays if you want to become beautiful it is easy. You just need money and then go see a doctor.
Have a wonderful day!
~T. Lynn
Beauty is a matter of personal preference.
>>correct
I agree but these days many people want to be like actress and actors.
>>I agree. But these days, many people want to be like an actress or an actor.
So they buy a lot of things which atreess and actors\'s same things.
>>So they buy a lot of things which actresses and actors use or endorse.
Also they want to have face like actresses and actors.
>> They also want to have a face like actresses and actors do.
I agree that they do plastic surgery but I disagree that they do plastic surgery like actress and actors.
>>They can have plastic surgery but they don\'t have to do plastic surgery so that they will look like an actor or an actress.
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