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2016-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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These days many people become dry with their emotion. Also they want bad news and hot news. I think that many people become to have dry feeling because of games. When we watch warm news, our emotion can change warm. I really want it.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms. [이름]! Thank you for always doing your homework. You are right. Nowadays, people don\'t care much about other people. They tend to focus more on work and on themselves. Have a great day! ~T. Lynn   These days many people become dry with their emotion. >>These days, many people become emotionless.Also they want bad news and hot news. >>They also want to hear about bad news and the latest news. I think that many people become to have dry feeling because of games. >> I think many people become emotionless because of online games.When we watch warm news, our emotion can change warm. >> When we watch touching news, our emotion can change.I really want it. >>I really want that.

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