Homework

Hello, teacher. Please, read and review my compositions below. - In my undergraduate days, my interest was not weighted toward certain field of politics such as comparative politics, international politics and political thought. I tried to be well equipped to study politics in depth through covering all fields of politics. - I have a my own road map for studying politics. This road map has being carried out since in my university days. - After getting my master's degree, I have tried to comprehensively understand the political history of Joseon Dynasty. This is because there is a very strong correlation with political thought and political history. - I will keep this way of study going according to my roadmap. - Writing a paper and preparing for the presentation about it are obviously not easy tasks, but it would be good to gain experience for scholars. I believe that attending various academic conferences undoubtedly provides valuable learning opportunities for me.

Hi Kaylee! I checked your second composition. Please review my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!Please, read and review my compositions below. >> CORRECT!- In my undergraduate days, my interest was not weighted towards certain field of politics such as comparative politics, international politics and political thought. >> CORRECT! I tried to be well equipped to study politics in depth through covering all fields of politics. >> I tried to be well-informed to study politics in depth by covering all fields of politics. - I have a my own road map for studying politics. >> I\'ve had my own road map in studying politics. This road map has being carried out since in my university days. >> I\'ve been following this road map since my university days.- After getting my master\'s degree, I have tried to comprehensively understand the political history of Joseon Dynasty. >> CORRECT!  This is because there is a very strong correlation with political thought and political history. >> This is because there is a very strong correlation between political thought and political history. - I will keep this way of study going according to my roadmap. >> I will stick to this study method according to my road map.- Writing a paper and preparing for the presentation about it are obviously not easy tasks, but it would be good to gain experience for scholars. >> Writing a paper and preparing for a presentation are obviously not easy tasks, but it would be a good way to gain experience for scholars. I believe that attending various academic conferences undoubtedly provides valuable learning opportunities for me. >> I believe that attending various academic conferences would undoubtedly provide valuable learning opportunities for me.