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Hello, teacher. Please read and review below. My three major research achievements are as follows. Firstly, I published my research paper, "A Critical Review of Neo-Confucian Legitimacy about King Injo's Restoration" in the Korean Political Science Review, which is the top journal of politics in Korea, in 2016. I am the co-author of this paper, and I wrote this paper with my academic advisor. In this paper, I interpreted King Injo's Restoration of 1623, one of the political changes in Joseon, based on political thought of the time, Neo-Confucianism. Next, my another research paper, "~~~~~" was published in the Journal of Chinese Studies in 2015. I am the lead author of this article, and I also wrote this paper with my academic advisor. This article is my academic result which I had achieved in my master's degree course by studying East Asian Political Thought. In this paper, I tried to explain Mencius' notion of Heaven in a social scientific manner.

Hi Kaylee! I checked your composition here. Please review my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Please read and review below.>> Please read and review the text below.My three major research achievements are as follows.>> CORRECT! Firstly, I published my research paper, \"A Critical Review of Neo-Confucian Legitimacy about King Injo\'s Restoration\" in the Korean Political Science Review, which is the top journal of politics in Korea, in 2016. >> Firstly, in 2016, I published my research paper, \"A Critical Review of Neo-Confucian Legitimacy about King Injo\'s Restoration\" in the Korean Political Science Review, which is the top journal of politics in Korea. I am the co-author of this paper, and I wrote this paper with my academic advisor. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I co-wrote this paper with my academic adviser. In this paper, I interpreted King Injo\'s Restoration of 1623, one of the political changes in Joseon, based on political thought of the time, Neo-Confucianism.>> In this paper, I interpreted King Injo\'s Restoration of 1623, one of the political changes in Joseon, based on the political thought at that time, Neo-Confucianism.Next, my another research paper, \"~~~~~\" was published in the Journal of Chinese Studies in 2015. >> Secondly, in 2015, my other research paper, \"~~~~~\" was published in the Journal of Chinese Studies. I am the lead author of this article, and I also wrote this paper with my academic advisor. >> Although I am the main author of this article, my academic adviser helped me co-write it. This article is my academic result which I had achieved in my master\'s degree course by studying East Asian Political Thought. >> This article is the result of my academic studies, which I had achieved by studying East Asian Political Thought during my master\'s degree course. *I\'m not entirely sure if I got this sentence right. It\'s a bit confusing. Sorry. ^^ In this paper, I tried to explain Mencius\' notion of Heaven in a social scientific manner. >> In this paper, I tried to explain Mencius\'s notion of heaven in a social and scientific manner.