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Hi Ms. [이름]!
There are so many songs written about love. Love can inspire people to do good things. Love could also destroy a person. But I agree with you that the love of parents to their children last forever and it cannot be broken. So I guess for them we could say love last forever.
Love,
~T. Lynn
I agree.
>>Correct
There are a lot of kinds of love.
>>There are many kinds of love.
I think parent\'s love for children is the best and it can last forever.
>>I think parents\' love for their children is the best and it last forever.
However it can\'t last forever with between man and woman.
>>However, it can\'t last forever between a man and a woman.
OR>> However, the love between a man and a woman can\'t last forever.
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