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2016-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I like to eat delicious foods so I am a plump woman. Sushi is the best. There is a family restaurant in my town which is a buffet restaurant. So I can eat many sushi and variety of foods. A few years ago, I visited in Japan. I can't forget delicious susi. I have ever eaten sushi is best in Japan. Anyway these days I can't go the restaurant because it shut down.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!

It\'s getting warmer in our city. How about in your place? I heard it has been raining. Be careful not to catch a cold. Thank you for making your homework. You did very well. Most of your sentences are correct. Way to go Ms. [이름]!

Have a blessed day!

~T. Lynn

 

I like to eat delicious foods so I am a plump woman.

>>correct
Sushi is the best.

>>correct
There is a family restaurant in my town which is a buffet restaurant.

>>correct
So I can eat many sushi and variety of foods.

>>correct
A few years ago, I visited in Japan.

>>A few years ago, I visited Japan.
I can\'t forget delicious susi.

>>I can\'t forget the delicious Sushi I\'ve tasted there.
I have ever eaten sushi is best in Japan.

>> I have eaten the best Sushi in Japan.
Anyway, these days I can\'t go the restaurant because it shut down.

>>correct

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