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2016-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

학생이 쓴 원문

I like actually country. But I have to live city. In my situation I can't move country. The reason why I can't move that is my job and the education for my baby. I prefer to live city. Because it is convenient and accustomed for me. It is more easy to get a culture benefit.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Thank you for doing your homework. I also like to live in the countryside because I have been living in the city since I was born. I am curious if I can adapt living in the countryside. ^^ Teacher Sophia Here are your corrections: I like actually country. But I have to live city. In my situation I can\'t move country. >> I actually like to live in the countryside but I have to live in the city because of my situation. The reason why I can\'t move that is my job and the education for my baby. >> I can\'t move to live in the countryside because of my job and the education of my kid.I prefer to live city. Because it is convenient and accustomed for me. >> I prefer to live in the city because it\'s convenient and I am accustomed to it.It is more easy to get a culture benefit. >> Life becomes easier in the city.    

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