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2016-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. Please read and review the text below. Sub title: Debate on Rebuilding the Political Order after King Injo's Restoration What kind of political order did they imagine to rebuild after the Coup? To answer this question, there needs to be examined how they recognized the 1623 Coup's cause and effect. There were two distinctive positions about it. One group thought that abusing the Great Northerner faction's authority in the King Kwanghaegun's reign, as represented by Lee I-Cheom, was the biggest reason for the 1623 Coup. The other group including King Injo, on the other hand, thought that the Coup resulted from the fact that the former King Kwanghaegun hadn't played a political role properly as a king in his reign. These two kinds of opinions are not necessarily oppositive. Nevertheless, this distinction is very important because a diagnosis of the 1623 Coup's causes causes influence on the direction of rebuilding political order of Joseon Dynasty after then.

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Hi Kaylee! I checked your composition below. Please review my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! Please read and review the text below. >> CORRECT! Sub title: Debate on Rebuilding the Political Order after King Injo\'s Restoration >> CORRECT! What kind of political order did they imagine to rebuild after the Coup? >> CORRECT! To answer this question, there needs to be examined how they recognized the 1623 Coup\'s cause and effect. >> To answer this question, we need to examine how they recognized the 1623 Coup\'s cause and effect. There were two distinctive positions about it. >> CORRECT! One group thought that abusing the Great Northerner faction\'s authority in the King Kwanghaegun\'s reign, as represented by Lee I-Cheom, was the biggest reason for the 1623 Coup. >> CORRECT! The other group including King Injo, on the other hand, thought that the Coup resulted from the fact that the former King Kwanghaegun hadn\'t played a political role properly as a king in his reign. >> CORRECT! These two kinds of opinions are not necessarily oppositive. >> CORRECT! Nevertheless, this distinction is very important because a diagnosis of the 1623 Coup\'s causes causes influence on the direction of rebuilding political order of Joseon Dynasty after then. >> Nevertheless, this distinction is very important because a diagnosis of the cause of the 1623 Coup\'s influences the direction of rebuilding the political order of the Joseon Dynasty after then.  

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