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2016-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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If your were a teacher,how would you want to teach your students? Explain your answer in not more than ten sentences. If I were a teacher,I would counsel each student at my office room at first and try to memorize their names. Because I`d like to know them what to think,plan and need in their future. And then I`ll give proper projects with a team rather than listening and taking notes of a lecture.In other words,I want them to play an active role in their school life.And I`ll emphasize the importance of reading books that humanistic studies and field of interests. Those are my main points to teach them.

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Hello, Ma\'am [이름]! You must be a great teacher! Great teachers are warm, accessible, enthusiastic and caring. Teachers with these qualities are known to stay after school and make themselves available to students and parents who need them. Well, that is one of the qualities you gave emphasis in your composition. Teaching is one of the most complicated jobs today.  With all these qualities required, it’s no wonder that it’s hard to find great teachers. Well, you are one of them! -Teacher Chloe If your were a teacher,how would you want to teach your students? Explain your answer in not more than ten sentences. >>If your were a teacher, how would you want to teach your students? If I were a teacher,I would counsel each student at my office room at first and try to memorize their names. >>If I were a teacher, I would memorize their names and counsel them at my office. Because I`d like to know them what to think,plan and need in their future. >>I would like to know their thoughts, plans and their needs to know them better. And then I`ll give proper projects with a team rather than listening and taking notes of a lecture. >>I would give them group projects instead of letting them listen and take down notes to my lectures. In other words,I want them to play an active role in their school life. >>In other words, I would want them to be active at school. And I`ll emphasize the importance of reading books that humanistic studies and field of interests. >>Also, I would want to emphasize them the importance of studying and to know their field of interests. Those are my main points to teach them. >>There are are my pain points to teach them.

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