Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
Please read and review the text below.
To study this topic, I already finished reading the annals of King Injo.
Based on this reading, I could understand the contextual background for the politics of King Injo's reign, and I also reviewed the legitimacy of King Injo's Restoration.
In addition, I'm taking the class dealing with the political history in the late Joseon Dynasty while reading the annals of King Sonjo and Gwanghaegun.
I believe a comprehensive understanding of the political history before King Injo's reign would be helpful to find out the political order, which was intended to be rebuilt after King Injo's Restoration.
Two kinds of tasks would be imposed on me after reading the annals of King Sonjo and Gwanghaegun.
First of all, the concept of normalization of royal authority, the theoretical framework of this study, needs to be clarified.
Next, I have to interpret the politics of King Injo's reign based on this theoretical framework.
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! Please read and review the text below.>> CORRECT! To study this topic, I already finished reading the annals of King Injo.
>> CORRECT! Based on this reading, I could understand the contextual background for the politics of King Injo\'s reign, and I also reviewed the legitimacy of King Injo\'s Restoration.
>> CORRECT! In addition, I\'m taking the class dealing with the political history in the late Joseon Dynasty while reading the annals of King Sonjo and Gwanghaegun.
>> In addition, I\'m taking a class which tackles the political history in the late Joseon Dynasty while reading the annals of King Sonjo and Gwanghaegun.
I believe a comprehensive understanding of the political history before King Injo\'s reign would be helpful to find out the political order, which was intended to be rebuilt after King Injo\'s Restoration. >> CORRECT! Two kinds of tasks would be imposed on me after reading the annals of King Sonjo and Gwanghaegun.
>> CORRECT! First of all, the concept of normalization of royal authority, the theoretical framework of this study, needs to be clarified.
>> First, the concept of normalization of royal authority, the theoretical framework of this study, needs to be clarified.Next, I have to interpret the politics of King Injo\'s reign based on this theoretical framework.
>> CORRECT!
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