Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher.
There are only two days left until the due date.
Please read and review the text below.
I believe it is very important for students studying political thought to satisfy two elements as follows.
Above all, they should have sincere passion and expectations to seek a better life.
Next, they need to understand various aspects of people's lives.
Regarding these two elements, I believe that I meet above two conditions.
Here, I will deliver my personal background focusing on these two.
In this process, I will make full use of various literary collections written by the politicians at that time such as Lee Gwi(李貴), [이름] Ryu(金鎏), and Choi Myeong-gil(崔鳴吉).
Based on the above research plan, I will reconstruct the politics of King Injo's reign by the theme of ‘political thought of restoration(反正)'.
Through this process, I believe I could explain convincingly the political order which was planned by the politicians after King Injo's Restoration.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Please review my corrections below. Good luck with your paper!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
>> CORRECT! There are only two days left until the due date.
>> CORRECT! Please read and review the text below.>> CORRECT! I believe it is very important for students studying political thought to satisfy two elements as follows.
>> I believe it is very important for students who are studying Political Thought to achieve these two elements.Above all, they should have sincere passion and expectations to seek a better life.
>> CORRECT! Next, they need to understand various aspects of people\'s lives.
>> CORRECT! Regarding these two elements, I believe that I meet above two conditions.
>> Regarding these two elements, I believe that I meet the two conditions mentioned above.Here, I will deliver my personal background focusing on these two.>> CORRECT! In this process, I will make full use of various literary collections written by the politicians at that time such as Lee Gwi(李貴), [이름] Ryu(金鎏), and Choi Myeong-gil(崔鳴吉).
>> CORRECT! Based on the above research plan, I will reconstruct the politics of King Injo\'s reign by the theme of ‘political thought of restoration(反正)\'.
>> CORRECT! Through this process, I believe I could explain convincingly the political order which was planned by the politicians after King Injo\'s Restoration.
>> Through this process, I believe I could convincingly explain the political order which was planned by the politicians after King Injo\'s Restoration.
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