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2016-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Teacher! This is the last part of my research paper.^^ I expect that my research will make some contributions in three aspects. Firstly, in theoretical aspect, this study is expected to overcome the earlier studies' limitation which explained the political history of the middle and late Joseon Dynasty through the frame of party politics because it pays attention to a role of king, one of the political actors, in addition to factions and officials. Secondly, in empirical aspect, this study will help us understand how the politicians recognized the political problems at that time, and what type of political order were planned by the politicians during King Injo's reign. Thirdly, despite weak current implications for people who living in a democratic society, I believe this study could make concrete connections between political thought and durability of political system, and also provide an opportunity for contemporary politicians to reflect on the responsibility of political design.

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Hello Kaylee! Finally! This is the last one! Please check my corrections below. Good luck with your research paper! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Teacher! >> CORRECT! This is the last part of my research paper.^^>> CORRECT! I expect that my research will make some contributions in three aspects. >> CORRECT! Firstly, in theoretical aspect, this study is expected to overcome the earlier studies\' limitation which explained the political history of the middle and late Joseon Dynasty through the frame of party politics because it pays attention to a role of king, one of the political actors, in addition to factions and officials. >> Firstly, in theoretical aspect, this study is expected to overcome the earlier studies\' limitation which explained the political history of the middle and late Joseon Dynasty through the frame of party politics because it pays attention to the role of a king, one of the political actors, in addition to factions and officials. Secondly, in empirical aspect, this study will help us understand how the politicians recognized the political problems at that time, and what type of political order were planned by the politicians during King Injo\'s reign. >> CORRECT! Thirdly, despite weak current implications for people who living in a democratic society, I believe this study could make concrete connections between political thought and durability of political system, and also provide an opportunity for contemporary politicians to reflect on the responsibility of political design. >> Thirdly, despite weak current implications for people who are living in a democratic society, I believe this study could make concrete connections between political thought and durability of the political system, and also provide an opportunity for contemporary politicians to reflect on the responsibility of political design.

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