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If I get my own land, I would like to consider two ways. First, I would like to build my building or house. Fortunately if I get huge land, I will build a few buildings to live and to lease for tenants. When I imagined for having a building back in university, I thought leasing of residential space is good for investment because many students try to find a house near universities. And lots of freshmen enter every year. So it is obviously valuable. Next is doing speculation. It will bring me wealth because it is one of the positive strategies. I don’t know how I manage it yet and it could be hard to do. Nevertheless, I know that many people have been getting wealth in this way. From it I should learn how to speculate a land from a specialist in this field. To conclude if I get this opportunity early in life I would choose speculation of a land, however if not I would get first way stably since that can bring loss of money.
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Hello there [이름]! ^^
Wow, you\'ve really thought about this topic. I\'m quite impressed. ~~~
Let\'s pretend this situation did happen and if I were you, it would be better to just build residential buildings since, yes, it is more stable plus you could increase the rent annually while speculation does bring a fat wad of cash in a short time that is if you are lucky since speculation are generally risky financial transactions in an attempt to profit from fluctuations in the market value. ^^
Good work and I will see you soon.
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
If I get my own land, I would like to consider two ways.
>> If I get my own land, I would consider two ways on using it.
First, I would like to build my building or house. Fortunately if I get huge land, I will build a few buildings to live and to lease for tenants.
>> First, I would build my own house but if I am fortunate enough to own a wide expanse of land, I would build a few residential buildings for lease.
When I imagined for having a building back in university, I thought leasing of residential space is good for investment because many students try to find a house near universities. And lots of freshmen enter every year. So it is obviously valuable.
>> Back in university, I imagined how good of an investment it would be in owning a building and leasing it to students since a lot of students look for a residence close to their universities. Besides that, there are plenty of incoming freshmen every year. So, obviously, it would be profitable.
Next is doing speculation. It will bring me wealth because it is one of the positive strategies.
>> The second way of using the land would be engaging in speculation. I think this would bring me wealth since it is one of the definite money-making strategies.
I don’t know how I manage it yet and it could be hard to do. Nevertheless, I know that many people have been getting wealth in this way. From it I should learn how to speculate a land from a specialist in this field.
>> I\'m not sure on how to go about it yet and it might be hard to do nevertheless, I know that many people have gotten wealthy through this. I could learn how land speculation is done through a seasoned veteran in the field.
To conclude if I get this opportunity early in life I would choose speculation of a land, however if not I would get first way stably since that can bring loss of money.
>> In conclusion, if I would be given this opportunity earlier in my lifetime, I would choose to do speculation but if not, then I would follow the first way that I\'ve mentioned since it is more stable.
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