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2016-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, teacher. It's been a long time. Instead of doing my homework, I'll talk to you about my visit to Malaysia. Malaysia left a favorable impression on me. I have been to Malaysia when I was a university student. Back then, I was surprised to find a developed state of Malaysia. It was my second visit to Malaysia. As its nickname, New York of Asia, Kuala Lumpur has the cityscape of skyscrapers. Petronas Twin Tower, the symbol of Kuala Lumpur, is really great. I heard that the one of the twin tower was constructed by a Korean company while the other of them was constructed by a Japan company. Unfortunately, I couldn't go to Petronas Twin Tower this time since I had to visit several places for my son such as a theme park and a bird park. My husband's apartment is located in the south-western part of the city, and it takes about 20 minutes by car from the center of the city. The name of the village is Mon't Kiara. I felt that it was clean, quiet, and safe to live in. To be continued....

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Hi Kaylee! Thanks for sharing about your wonderful trip to Malaysia. I would love to see the Petronas Towers in Kuala Lumpur too someday. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! It\'s been a long time. >> CORRECT! Instead of doing my homework, I\'ll talk to you about my visit to Malaysia. >> CORRECT! Malaysia left a favorable impression on me. >> CORRECT! I have been to Malaysia when I was a university student. >> CORRECT! Back then, I was surprised to find a developed state of Malaysia. >> CORRECT! It was my second visit to Malaysia. >> CORRECT! As its nickname, New York of Asia, Kuala Lumpur has the cityscape of skyscrapers. >> Like its nickname, New York of Asia, Kuala Lumpur has the cityscape of skyscrapers. Petronas Twin Towers, the symbol of Kuala Lumpur, is really great. >> CORRECT! I heard that the one of the twin tower was constructed by a Korean company while the other of them was constructed by a Japan company. >> I heard that one of the twin towers was constructed by a Korean company while the other one was constructed by a Japanese company. Unfortunately, I couldn\'t go to Petronas Twin Tower this time since I had to visit several places for my son such as a theme park and a bird park. >> Unfortunately, I couldn\'t go to the Petronas Twin Towers this time since I had to visit places like the theme park and the bird park for my son.My husband\'s apartment is located in the south-western part of the city, and it takes about 20 minutes by car from the center of the city. >> CORRECT! The name of the village is Mon\'t Kiara. >> CORRECT! I felt that it was clean, quiet, and safe to live in. >> I thought it was a clean, quiet and safe place to live in.

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