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Hello, teacher. This is the second story about my visit to Malaysia.^^ As I told you before, I am planning to live in Malaysia for a month this coming summer vacation. So, I looked for English academies for my son. Fortunately, there are several nearby academies. We will study English while my husband is working. We had experiences studying English in the Philippines last winter vacation. Studying English abroad is not new for us, so I believe my son and me would adjust well to the life in Malaysia. To sum up, this visit to Malaysia made a good impression on me, and I really look forward to next visit to Malaysia. I feel sorry that I couldn't study English with you then. I promise that I will study English hard there.

Hi Kaylee! Wait... Are you telling me that you cannot study with me for one month?!   I\'m going to miss you.  Anyway, thank you for letting me know about this earlier. Please review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT! This is the second story about my visit to Malaysia.^^>> CORRECT! As I told you before, I am planning to live in Malaysia for a month this coming summer vacation. >> CORRECT! So, I looked for English academies for my son. >> CORRECT! Fortunately, there are several nearby academies. >> CORRECT! We will study English while my husband is working. >> CORRECT! We had experiences studying English in the Philippines last winter vacation. >> We had some experience studying English in the Philippines last winter vacation.Studying English abroad is not new for us, so I believe my son and me would adjust well to the life in Malaysia. >> Studying English abroad is not new for us, so I believe we would adjust well to the life in Malaysia. To sum up, this visit to Malaysia made a good impression on me, and I really look forward to next visit to Malaysia. >> To sum it up, this visit to Malaysia left a good impression on me and I really look forward to my next visit there.I feel sorry that I couldn\'t study English with you then. >> CORRECT! I promise that I will study English hard there. >> CORRECT!