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2016-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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The reason why people don't get respect from other is selfishness. If you love other as love myself you can be loved by others. And you can also get respect from them. Do not calculate the situation how to earn benefit or not, when you are working. If you just follow rational, all things will going well.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름], Thank you for doing your homework. Have you ever met someone who was rude to you and didn’t hold you with much regard? How did you feel? Did you feel annoyed? Peeved? If you are a self respecting individual, chances are you want others to treat you with respect. And you know what, age isn’t a prerequisite nor is it a magic key to gaining respect. I’ve seen plenty of people who are young be highly respected from their elders. I’ve also come across older people who I’d never respect because their actions are so out of line. It’s about how you conduct yourself, your attitudes towards others and your actions. Regardless of whether you are a teenager, a student, a new member in your team/company, or someone starting out in the industry, you can be well respected by others. Nearly anything will earn you respect in the eyes of someone. But only certain things will earn you respect in the eyes of those who are respected. It’s that simple. So, true respect is not earned of injuring oneself or breaking the law. The respect earned by that is not true and lasting, because it must be reaffirmed. It is so important for some to be respected that they would to that and more. However, the way to earn respect is to be respectful. Make it an attitude, not a thing given to a person after they have proven themselves. To me, respect means that you listen to someone’s ideas, follow rules that have been established, as well as know when to help someone, or ask them if they need help. Respect is not just to a person, it can be just something in general. Real Respect is an attitude. True Respect, real Respect is selfless, because you must give of yourself to respect. Teacher Sophia ^^ Here are your corrections: The reason why people don\'t get respect from other is selfishness. >> CORRECT  If you love other as love myself you can be loved by others. And you can also get respect from them. >> If you love others than you love yourself then you can gain respect.Do not calculate the situation how to earn benefit or not, when you are working. >> Don\'t count all the good things that you have done for others.If you just follow rational, all things will going well. >> You should be rational and everything will work out well.  

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